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Kippers and Castle Keys

Breakfast at the oaken gate

By Diane FosterPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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I check in where the moat keeps time,

Suitcases hush across the ancient stone,

Candles rehearse a welcome in low tone,

I check in where the moat keeps time.

Suitcases hush across the ancient stone,

A portrait watches, lacquered, grave, and calm,

The host slips keys that warm my palm,

Suitcases hush across the ancient stone.

A portrait watches, lacquered, grave, and calm,

He lists the rules beneath a creaking gong,

If doors breathe back, be kind and play along,

A portrait watches, lacquered, grave, and calm.

He lists the rules beneath a creaking gong,

Kippers at eight by the oaken gate,

Night stills the courtyard while the lanterns wait,

He lists the rules beneath a creaking gong.

I check in where the moat keeps time,

Suitcases hush across the ancient stone,

Candles rehearse a welcome in low tone,

I check in where the moat keeps time.

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About the Creator

Diane Foster

I’m a professional writer, proofreader, and all-round online entrepreneur, UK. I’m married to a rock star who had his long-awaited liver transplant in August 2025.

When not working, you’ll find me with a glass of wine, immersed in poetry.

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 2 months ago

    A wonderful take on the form and the challenge. Thank you so much

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