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break-up nonet challenge
By Kayleigh Fraser โจPublished 2 years ago โข 1 min read
Through evils to which you paid respect
- the lies, the anger, the neglect;
all unearned perfection, fell.
Kintsugi wonโt work well,
For no gold paint could
hide or undo
the hollow
inside
you
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Comments (5)
Oh yes! Now this is excellent work - The imagery of the gold - usually used in poetic and optimistic repair being overshadowed by the void inside the broken person. Now that's poetry!
I haven't an idea, sorry but liked your words.
Ach, Like Mike...loved that you used something that's normally used in a positive way to show the irreparable damage to a relationship. Well done, Kayleigh!
Yes, so true, nothing can fill the hollow inside me. Loved this so much!
Great take on the challenge and love the concept of Kintsugi being used for the breakup