Kintsugi Sings: Beautiful Pain; Restore Your Joy
A Chant-Royal poem

Pain is unpleasant; we can say
it quells our hope, tugs at our heart
we wish, we hope, oh, how we pray
for solace, change, a brand new start
crying, depressed, makes one feel old
when anguish is the picture's mold
a new perspective waits for you
repurposed joy, which you can do
of damaged art; NO, ouch, this stings
a piece of work, a lesson, too
"beautiful pain," kintsugi sings
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Kintsugi flair asks you to weigh
repair your pain and make it art
think hand-fashioned, a pot of clay
rework the torment; play your part
solemn's suffrage; shall not be sold
a new view awaits, yes, behold
question's query, quick in the queue
fix it, a fact that lies in lieu
now is the time for pulling strings
to try something you never knew
"beautiful pain," Kintsugi sings
~
Discomfort needn't be just grey
abstracts are vital; they are smart
distorted lines, like night and day
share a feeling, some sweet, some tart
can't fix folly; make a new fold
joy scrapes the surface when it's cold
while the hurt is real, yes, it's true
it's how you shape it, or construe
master effort; rework some things
dibble dabble, time's overdue
"beautiful pain," Kintsugi sings
~
Of cracked and broken, if I may
a truthful statement, not a dart
self-sentenced pace; one cannot stay
blood pressure's boiling off the chart
rebuilding pieces with some gold
highights fractures, compels them bold
unhidden cracks give you a clue
strain is lovely; new point of view
in each struggle, a message rings
joy's blessed feeling; gazer's glue
"beautiful pain," Kintsugi sings
~
One falling mug; an outcry: HEY
fumbling the sink work; slip and slarp
reglued and painted, right away
highlighting splittings, no dispart
now fancy markings take their hold
awareness heightened: driven; goaled
joy renewed, a delicious brew
helps more than self when viewed askew
crafting complete, contrasting clings
odd lines and all rebuilt anew
"beautiful pain," Kintsugi sings
~
Pang exposed is an artful woo
accept repairs: a thought to stew
renewed joy; we shall live like kings
gold bonded splittings without rue
"beautiful pain," Kintsugi sings
~
Author's Note: For this challenge, I used the Chant Royal, a 60 line French poem dating to the 14th century.
Here are the format specifics:
- Five 11-line stanzas followed by a 5-line envoy
- 11- line stanza rhyme scheme: ababccddedE
- Final line of each stanza is a refrain
- Envoy rhyme scheme: ddedE
- Line consistency is key; usually 8 or 10 syllables
I wrote of pain, comparing it to something broken (like a mug) while incorporating the Japanese art of Kintsugi (Kintsukurio), which repairs broken pottery by fixing cracks with lacquer blended with powdered gold, silver, or platinum.
Translated to "Golden Joinery," Kintsugi focuses not on hiding the damage, but on highlighting cracks as part of the object's history.
Might we treat pain and all its many facets equally? Might we transform the "broken" feeling into art by affording pain its spot in the sun? Flawed beauty is unique and exquisite, and when embraced, it will restore joy.
Feel all the lines, even the breakings, as imperfections are perfectly fashioned. Joy awaits all who are willing to see!
About the Creator
Marilyn Glover
Poet, writer, & editor, writing to uplift humanity. A Spiritual person who practices Reiki and finds inspiration in nature.
Mother of four, grandmother of two, British American dual citizen living in the States
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Comments (5)
Whoaaaa, you executed the Chant Royal soooo beautifully! Such a wonderful poem. I loved it!
Wow —that’s quite a constraint. Well done! Great story love the lesson in how to enjoy pain!
Thank you for sharing these amazing words, and surely a Top Story. The longest poem I have done was the rewrite of Poe's "The Raven" but the longest I use regularly is the Sestina. I am bookmarking this
Wow! This is so unique, I loved it. I've always been fascinated by kintsugi flair. Thanks for teaching me about the Chant Royal too!
Mad respect for taking a stab at this super-tightly structured form. I haven’t approached this form just yet. One day . . .