Hiking earthen trails
Gliding sides of heartbeat tracks
Cool wind breathes so deep
~
Resting and watching
Sunshine peeks on calm journals
Cuddles create peace
~
Energy bars sleek
Hawk steers a new direction
Feather found on ground
~
Direction through woods
Blazing shortcuts is so fun
Sense of the right way?
~
Lunch tasted so good
Waitress just misunderstood
But laughter did ease
~
Days like these are best
When soul has time to just rest
Much needed confess
~
Senses keen and glad
Grip the good memories lest
we forget them all
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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So peaceful and much needed. Lovely poem.
Sounds like a great day! And absolutely, we must cherish these types of memories.
Yes, that feather... "hawk steers a new direction" Follow that feather and the hawk to freedom. 😊😇✨
This feels like a deep breath of fresh air. That feather? Definitely a sign. Keep hiking, keep sensing, keep writing.✨