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justice came out through another door

an anti-family limerick

By Moon DesertPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Photo by Alexander Milo on Unsplash

rent paid in advance for five long student years like in a trance

can constantly fix your finances

one daughter good, the other one bad

how dare you decide these things within this triad?

triggers always make these things resurface to an impasse

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Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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