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Just Below the Surface

Concealed but painfully real

By K.B. Silver Published 2 months ago 1 min read
Frost Blister on Lake Caples California Photo by K.B. Silver

Festering

Just beneath the surface

Lies, percolate

Forming a pustule

Expanding and pulsating

The more gingerly

You handle them

The larger it swells

Spreading its reek deeper

Widening out

There are two states

Growing

And burst

The day finally comes

When the cracks

Overflow

Pressure breaches

The propagating load of filth

Explodes onto the

Outside world

Contaminating

All touched

By its spreading

Tendrils of

Overwhelming doubt

Leaving you mired

In melancholy

Frozen in place

Dropping to your knees

In paralyzed grief

It takes less time

Than you would think

To film over

Crustifying

Putrifying

Under layers of

Ruminating think

K.B. Silver

social commentarysurreal poetryMental Health

About the Creator

K.B. Silver

K.B. Silver has poems published in magazine Wishbone Words, and lit journals: Sheepshead Review, New Note Poetry, Twisted Vine, Avant Appa[achia, Plants and Poetry, recordings in Stanza Cannon, and pieces in Wingless Dreamer anthologies.

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  • Komal2 months ago

    Oooof. This one is raw-raw! Brilliantly grotesque and emotionally accurate in that way only metaphors involving pus ever truly are. May all future emotional blemishes pop cleanly and with minimum splash damage. 😂

  • Tim Carmichael2 months ago

    You have a real talent for using words to describe intense emotions. Exploring these difficult topics takes great courage, writing and honesty.

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