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Jupiter’s Whispering Storms

I asked for luck Jupiter gave me life’s storms

By Marie381Uk Published about a month ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Jupiter’s Whispering Storms

Jupiter roared silently

through endless black,

its storms curling like serpents

around moons that quivered.

I watched the hurricanes spin,

pulling clouds into spirals,

and felt the pulse

of distant thunder in my chest.

Its rings shimmered quietly,

casting silver over darkness,

and I understood

that chaos could be beautiful.

The moons leaned in softly,

pressing themselves against the light,

and I followed their dance

through winds I could not name.

I felt the gravity pull

at thoughts I could not hold,

twisting them gently

into shapes I could not see.

Jupiter whispered secrets

of storms older than time,

and I carried them quietly,

folded into my own pulse.

Even when I left,

the storm’s memory stayed,

spinning through my veins,

curling gently around my heart.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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