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Judgment

by Aaron

By Aaron RichmondPublished 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in Tattoo This Line Challenge
Judgment
Photo by Lisa Yount on Unsplash

Who said I was coming to help,

descending serene from parting clouds,

gathering your brokenness tenderly,

cradling such fragile hopes unbowed?

••••

Who whispered softly I'd be patient,

eyes forgiving, hands extending wide—

favoring second chances purchased,

overlooking endless pride?

••••

Did you imagine my mercy as weakness,

my silence as tolerance deep?

Did you read grace into my departure,

while injustice ruled your sleep?

••••

You build kingdoms in my absence,

idols of gold; flesh; fame;

self-blessed hatred fills my temples,

daring to cry out in my name.

••••

I speak of love, receiving judgment,

speak my peace, war’s in your reply.

My words twisted into weapons,

truth crucified in every lie.

••••

Did you think redemption an entitlement,

without question, without pause?

Did you really think I would yield,

when you’ve rejected all human laws?

••••

Now who cries mercy at my coming,

who dares plead ignorance this hour?

Who begs and pleads for help and life,

when you've abused my love; your power?

••••

Who said I was coming to help?

Silence settles, sharp and true.

Even now, I hear you trembling—

••••

the hour draws near—

redemption comes for you.

Elegy

About the Creator

Aaron Richmond

I get bored and I write things. Sometimes they're good. Sometimes they're bad. Mostly they're things.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran8 months ago

    Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Luna8 months ago

    Both hating one's own procrastination and indulging in the immediate comfort.

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