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Jill 22

A study of a relationship in decline

By BrenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read

she don’t moan

she don’t move

jill jill

jill’s a shit screw

she don’t holler

she don’t hoot

jill jill

jill’s a dud root

she don’t wriggle

she don’t buck

jill jill

jill’s a slack fuck

she don’t pout

she don’t play

jill jill

jill’s a dud lay

she don’t act all passive

she don’t act at all

jill jill

jill's a useless ball

she’s quite good looking

not like she’s a hag

jill jill

jills just a shit shag

she don’t blow

she don’t give head

jill

jill jill

jill jill jill

jill jill jill jill,

jill

jill jill

jill jill jill

jill jill jill jill,

jill jill

jill jill jill

jill jill jill jill

jill jill jill jill jill’s fucking dead!

social commentaryperformance poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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