“How can you say that it's not working,
I've always tried to make it work.
How could you do this to us?”
“Hate to be cliché, but
It's not you, it's me.”
“That's the worst line,
You could use!”
“Sorry.”
“Bitch”
About the Creator
Liam Storm
I currently work as a thatcher, but love the art of writing a narrative, currently I am working on putting my ideas onto paper and creating a book. In the meantime I create short stories to keep myself, fiancée and two dogs entertained.
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Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (5)
The one-word responses at the end are cold but, close the poem and encapsulate the breakup so well, particularly the different reactions.
Great poem Liam, but sometimes it is me!
Oh well, bitch it is! Loved this so much!
Ah!! That final line was unexpected but sooo well played!! Great work Liam!
Don't hold back, Liam. Tell us how you really feel! 😁 Well done! This is packed with emotion!