The world is so cold
Everything is froze
It gets me in a zone
The ice forms a mode
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You can find me at the fireplace
Staying warm
In my home
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The sky isn't blue anymore
The world turns grey
Let's see if it's going to snow today
I have my coat ready by the door
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You can find me drinking hot chocolate
Staying warm
In my home
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There are icy roads
Please remember to drive slow
Let the kids draw smiley faces on the frosty windows
Here the snow never comes in loads
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You can find me making s’mores
Staying warm
In my home
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See the kids putting two fingers to their lips and breathing in
Then they remove their fingers and breathe out
If you are worried you have no idea what this is about
They're just fake smoking
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You will find me putting up a Christmas tree
Staying warm
In my home
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It can get a little foggy
People accidentally walk into lakes
Don’t let the fog determine your fate
Stay away from heavy drinking parties
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You will find me by the stove making gumbo
Staying warm
In my home
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I don't like the cold
It hurt my bones
It makes the days so long
Did you send your letter to the North Pole?
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You will find me covered with my heating blanket
Staying warm
In my home
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Bring on the frost
I love being cozy and staying in the house
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Comments (12)
Oh, yeah. I hate the winter and we get loads of snow up here!
I love where you took this challenge, I like that ‘in my home’ was alternating and repeating The warnings you gave was a nice touch too I love that it was also fun and playful. It’s getting me ready for the frost, and I really should be writing my letter to the North Pole lol. I loved this 👌🏽👏🏽
Great icy poem of winter's frost. I could literally feel the chill invade.
So sweet! A nice portayal of perspectives.
Tumi je lekha ta likhecho, ta ekta anek goruponno ebong emotional bhara chhobi toiri kore. Je bhabe tumi shorirer thanda ebong buke thaka thanda boshondha ke baat diye, ekti chhobi toyiri korecho ja amader manoshik obostha ke bozhaye. Ekhane "home" ar "warmth" er modhye ekta onek boro bhittir connection ache, je ta manushke anek anandito ebong shanti dayok lage. Lekhar ek ekti anchol thanda o garom er modhye chole, ja amader gharey thaka o ekla thakar modhye ekta anandito bhabna jagaye. Tumi jemon "fake smoking" ba "gumbo" toiri korar kotha likhecho, seta onek manoshik chhobi toiri kore. Kichu kichu line, ja dhore rakhe tumi tobu aage giye jak, kintu ekhane ekti onek deep manoshik sthiti toiri hoyeche—"I don't like the cold, it hurts my bones." Tumi onek bhalo bhabe bhabna, onek boro feeling gulo onek simple kotha diye bozhayecho.
What a great piece Emily. Nicely Done!!!!!!!!
Nicely done!!
I’m with you. Cold nd I do not get along well. Lol. Great poem. 💕😎
What a stunning piece. Emily👏👏
The Atmosphere of early frost and the preparation for the cold season !!!! Nicely done!
Mmmm, hot chocolate, yummy! Loved your poem!
This was such a rich, sensory experience, well done, Emily!