Your smile—is it real?
"No, it's filled with a void."
It previously held something.
That was her presence,
and her delicious food,
cooked daily for you.
Her funny dance moves,
just for you.
making sure that you smile
Now that she's gone
She took away your genuine smile.
She left with it.
Only a void exists within you.
Your heart bleeds.
The scars are buried.
Your heart needs someone special.
a replacement for your woman.
You're in pain,
but people believe you are fine.
Because of your smile
They don't realize you miss her.
They have no idea;
you still need her close.
They think you're doing well.
They see peace
and happiness in you.
Nonetheless,
you are a sobbing man.
With a smile,
filled with a void!
About the Creator
Gloria Penelope
Every creative piece is just me, telling a story. Enjoy!
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Comments (4)
Sad. Hugs. 🫂
Gosh this was so heartbreaking. I wish I could give him a hug 🥺❤️
Heartwrenching work, Gloria.
Hi Gloria, our depiction of the deep connection between indigenous communities and nature is both moving and insightful. The way you highlight their traditions and self-sufficiency truly brings their rich culture to life. Thank you for shedding light on such an important and often overlooked aspect of our world. Your words have a profound impact. Best Regards, Dr. Jay