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Is this good or bad?

But thinking makes it so

By Pitt GriffinPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Joseph Turner ‘Wind Breaking Against the Wa ves (c.1840)

What’s this challenge? Write a stream-of-consciousness poem. Why a poem? What makes a poem a poem? Just start writing. Is there a word limit? No. Why a poem? Don’t worry about it. I think the formatting is going to be key.

I should leave gaps.

Is it going to rain today? It’s too bad Wallace isn’t here to tell me how her joints feel. I hope she has a good flight. I wonder what the weather is like in New York (checks phone) 79? That’s nice.

OK. That’s enough lollygagging. It’s time to focus. Should I just write down what I’m thinking? Or should I write what someone else might be thinking? Might be easier to write what I’m thinking. But that might reveal too much. Like anyone would care.

As long as I am thinking about it, that counts as doing something, right? Stop using that crutch. Start writing, OK. Stop bullying me.

All right, I’m writing. I don’t think it’s any good. It’s an interesting idea though, right? I think so. They probably won’t. They’re probably right.

I should get some more coffee (stares out the window) I wonder if it’s going to rain today.

I should take a break. Swish it around in my head.

If you don’t want to do it. Just say you don’t wanna do it.

When is it due? OK I still have time.

Why don’t you just submit this? Then at least it would be done.

Because it’s crap.

Free Verse

About the Creator

Pitt Griffin

Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary, it occurred to me I should write things down. It allows you to live wherever you want - at least for awhile.

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  • Sean A.about a year ago

    Sounds like a lot of things running thought my head, though I have to disagree with your last line. Good Luck!

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