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He's feels content,
She's not comfortable,
There's a cold chill,
He watches her from the distance,
She glances back,
As she walks away
She has a smile on her face,
Because she left
He is now by himself,
She is happy,
He feels empty,
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Dylan
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Comments (5)
This takes me back, we live it both ways, if lucky we have the inverse of the inverse and all is well. It is great though when feelings are mutual and peace abides. This is really great Dylan, I have not quite mastered the writing of it, though the concept is clear. Kudos.
Nice job on the inverse! I like the portrayal of one event through two perspectives.
Very creative.
Nice use of the inverse!
Very sad. The two points of view of a break-up. It's bittersweet, isn't it? I'm able to relate to the experience, know it's pain, and yet you write it with such tenderness, making it palatable and beautiful...