Incarcerated
Ekphrastic Poem Inspired by Remedios Varo: Rheumatic Pain
fiery lacquers
licks at my amber hair
evolves into gray skeleton weavings
glazes my elegant gown into a
ashen cloak, I now must wear
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prisoner of my own body
stabbing pain
**
blade’s biting edge
tears into my smooth skin
like a
poisonous snake
feeding on my soft sinewy
**
icy restraints
strains
my butterfly limbs.
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grim guard to my own prison
no longer able to arise
and gaze out to the vibrant vista
**
devil’s infernal sharp scaffold
is my only pulsating panoramic,
shrouding me in earthy hues
**
palette knife’s scars
of unhealed wounds
on display
**
alas,
no beacon
of light here
just the bloody
canvas of my despair
**
Encaustic echos,
A silent decree
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I pray
I plead
I implore
**
this game of life
will forge ahead
but for me….
I am out of moves
Image Source: https://www.wikiart.org/en/remedios-varo/rheumatic-pain-1948
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Prayers & blessings, my friend.
Well-wrought! I love your selections of old paintings! I do the same to keep them in the cultural consciousness, or so I hope! Yet appearances can deceive, where there is way more inner space than outer space. Grace is conferred in ways unseen by eyes that seek only smiles or smiles that show not in the eye! She is turned to the pillar, chained to it, yes, with a knife in her back. But does she know something we don't know?
😊👏 Rich imagery! Could feel the ouches! 😕
Beautiful and powerful reflection on an artistic inspiration. Truly moving
Wow! Powerful! I'm sorry if this is your pain!❤️
This is a lot to think about.
This poem is beautiful, with its dark, powerful imagery. Wonderful work!
This is an emotive reflection on despair and hopelessness. It effectively conveys a sense of vulnerability and powerlessness causing the reader to empathize with the speaker's emotional state. You put a lot of effort into this.
Beautifully penned with so much truth and emotion!