In the Stillness of Your Mind
Echoes of Love in Silent Spaces
In the hush between heartbeats, I find you,
A whisper woven in morning's hue.
Your gaze, a dawn that softly breaks,
Stirring the soul, the earth awakes.
Fingers intertwined like fateful strands,
We dance through time, our spirits elate.
Each touch, a verse in love's sweet song,
a tune to which we belong.
A breeze blowing through autumn leaves,
your laughter, A symphony that the heart perceives.
A new world emerges in every smile,
Painted in shades of me and you.
Through storms and stillness, hand in hand,
Our names are carved into the sand.
A testament to love's embrace,
Eternal in its tender grace.
So let the stars chart our skies,
guided by your eyes' illumination.
For in that glow, I see my home,
A love that time has always known.
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Suborna Paul
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Comments (4)
A beautiful poem weaving love into nature’s embrace, capturing an eternal bond
This is some beautiful writing. It really captures the essence of love. The imagery is great, like "fingers intertwined like fateful strands" and "a breeze blowing through autumn leaves, your laughter". Made me think of special moments with someone. Do you think it's easy to convey such deep emotions through words? And how do you think one can make their own love stories as vivid as this?
beautiful !!
Excellent