A solitary soul, detached, kneels in peace
It's a rebellion against light itself
Breaths are lost in the remaining faint galaxies
The darkness was lost somewhere
It was immersed in absolute peace
On echo-less paths, emptiness has swallowed the darkness whole
Roaming between dreams and dark nights that will never return
The kindest end of all sensations has come to pass.
The soul bathes in the fog-dimmed sky
Dissolves into the perfumed breeze of a cooling wind
Then returns once more to the eternal shining star
The heart's rebellion wishes for the greatest gift
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A/N: This is a fictional poem, a result of a story unfolding in my mind.
About the Creator
Karan w.
Writer || Poet || Author
Author of "The Resonance–Two Together-Lost Forever
All worlds collapse the moment they touch the ground of reality—worlds I once created. Yet I find my bliss in the dissolution of my creations
'20/20'
"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan7 days ago in Beat
Comments (4)
Fabulous poem 🦋🦋🦋
Oooo, I'm looking forward to reading that story. Loved your poem!
Such a beautiful poem, Sk.
What a great piece of inspirational poetry. (May I ask a technical formatting question-How do I single space my poetry lines? I am typing the poetry book I published on Amazon and I really do not want to double space the whole book.)