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In the back seat of the limo

by Sam Harty

By ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYPublished 12 months ago 1 min read

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We admire each other,

us in our fancy best,

at the wedding

of your brother

where we are the guest.

-o-

I touch your cheek,

kiss your lips,

and feel your smile,

on soft leather seats

in high class style.

-o-

I really love

this little black dress

you're wearing,

the way it shows off

your thighs

with the blue hem

that sparkles

just like your eyes.

-o-

Removing my bowtie

and roll up my

tuxedo sleeves

your eyes dart up

as I put my hand

on your knee.

-o-

Ignoring the boxes

of rice on the floor

you put your feet

up on the seat

and your back

against the door.

-o-

My body fits perfect

between your thighs

with your breath

in my ear

the fact I'm excited

should be no surprise.

-o-

You wrap your hands

around my waist,

I sigh as you

kiss my neck with

exceeding haste.

-o-

I feel you

all over me

and myself in you.

It's bliss

even though it's not

the perfect venue.

-o-

Our sweat dances in unity,

your slips on the floor

then our rhythm is broken

by a TAP!, TAP!, TAP!

on the limo door.

Alas, our time together

is no more.

_______________

Heh. Sorry about that! But thanks for reading ! :D - Sam

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About the Creator

ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTY

Sam Harty is a poet of raw truth and quiet rebellion. Author of Lost Love Volumes I & II and The Lost Little Series, her work confronts heartbreak, trauma, and survival with fierce honesty and lyrical depth. Where to find me

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  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli 12 months ago

    EXPLICIT! AWWWW, the days pf long ago in the back seat of a limo! lol

  • Mother Combs12 months ago

    💙lovely

  • Andrew C McDonald12 months ago

    Lol. Been there… 😂😂 I love this Sam.

  • Kendall Defoe 12 months ago

    😗🥴😎

  • Marie381Uk 12 months ago

    Brilliant ✍️🏆♦️♦️♦️♦️

  • Calvin London12 months ago

    Love it especially the ending and because of the rhyme it dances along quite nicely.

  • Rowan Finley 12 months ago

    I freaking love this!!!!!

  • Tales by J.J.12 months ago

    filled with emotions, good read

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