
____________________
We admire each other,
us in our fancy best,
at the wedding
of your brother
where we are the guest.
-o-
I touch your cheek,
kiss your lips,
and feel your smile,
on soft leather seats
in high class style.
-o-
I really love
this little black dress
you're wearing,
the way it shows off
your thighs
with the blue hem
that sparkles
just like your eyes.
-o-
Removing my bowtie
and roll up my
tuxedo sleeves
your eyes dart up
as I put my hand
on your knee.
-o-
Ignoring the boxes
of rice on the floor
you put your feet
up on the seat
and your back
against the door.
-o-
My body fits perfect
between your thighs
with your breath
in my ear
the fact I'm excited
should be no surprise.
-o-
You wrap your hands
around my waist,
I sigh as you
kiss my neck with
exceeding haste.
-o-
I feel you
all over me
and myself in you.
It's bliss
even though it's not
the perfect venue.
-o-
Our sweat dances in unity,
your slips on the floor
then our rhythm is broken
by a TAP!, TAP!, TAP!
on the limo door.
Alas, our time together
is no more.
_______________
Heh. Sorry about that! But thanks for reading ! :D - Sam
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Sam Harty is a poet of raw truth and quiet rebellion. Author of Lost Love Volumes I & II and The Lost Little Series, her work confronts heartbreak, trauma, and survival with fierce honesty and lyrical depth. Where to find me
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Comments (8)
EXPLICIT! AWWWW, the days pf long ago in the back seat of a limo! lol
💙lovely
Lol. Been there… 😂😂 I love this Sam.
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Brilliant ✍️🏆♦️♦️♦️♦️
Love it especially the ending and because of the rhyme it dances along quite nicely.
I freaking love this!!!!!
filled with emotions, good read