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In Service To The Country

A Free Verse Poem For Poppy's Prompts #11

By Laura PruettPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

The maple leaf soared,

Red on white

Against the horizon

While the plane glided in,

Landed, wheels out,

On the blacktop,

Cutting grooves in the snow,

And I wiped my frozen tears away.

**********

The words still rang,

Soft in the snow –

“The Chief of the Defence Staff

Has entrusted me

To express his deep regret” –

And my heart rang too

With my own stark regret,

My tears flung to the ground below.

**********

The casket glided by,

Carried by hands

That knew the pain of loss

So well; so young,

So unforgivably tragic,

Yet they carried your

Wooden box with pride,

And their tears within.

**********

And I stood watching,

In my black suit and salute,

Wearing them like the armor

I had always hoped would save you;

But nothing ever saved you,

Not me, not them,

And the tears I’d held inside me

Fell open on the floor.

**********

Author's Note: I wrote this story as a contest entry for the Poppy's Prompts #11 challenge. I hope you enjoyed the read. I'd love to hear what you think, so please feel free to leave a comment, click the heart, and subscribe!

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Laura Pruett

Laura Pruett, author of The Dwarves Of Dimmerdown and others.

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  • Poppy about a year ago

    This is so well written. My favourite parts were the very beginning and the ending.

  • Great job! Very creative use of Poppy’s Prompts. So poignant… “And I stood watching, In my black suit and salute, Wearing them like the armor I had always hoped would save you; But nothing ever saved you,”

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    This was beautifu! and like Holly said, your poetry, what I've read of it, never feels clunky or forced, just flows freely! remarkable and a powerful important reminder!

  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    That maple leaf, so sad and a reminder of so many wars and loss.

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    Well done, and heartbreaking. Your petry really flows.

  • Wonderful entry but beautifully sad

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