Ordered to dance in the rivers,
We tied the whirligig to our feet with glee.
They seek a wet scene, a sight to uncover,
But in deserts, not a drop could be.
O weary fellow travelers, don't mix light with shade,
New remedies arise from every voice.
Don't let sick messiahs lead you astray,
In unity, we must find our choice.
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Excellent lines
Those messiahs - so many full of bad ego!
Loved the depth of meaning embodied in your poem.