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In Late Light

Brushing the water with sighs

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
In Late Light
Photo by Vincent van Zalinge on Unsplash

The wind moves slowly through the reeds,

Brushing the water with sighs.

A heron lifts from the water,

with only the sound of wings.

The willows let go of their gold,

One leaf at a time,

As if reluctant to part

But willing, in the end.

The creek still feels summer

In the way it glints at dusk

shimmering with quietness

that belongs to our memory.

We stand on the bank,

Not saying much,

Letting the moment gather

Like mist over the land.

It will pass. We know.

And we know better

than to embrace it quickly.

Still,

We hope it lingers,

Not forever,

Only long enough

that we don't forget.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Tiffany Gordon6 months ago

    Nicely-written! 🌸

  • Aspen Marie 6 months ago

    The serenity of this brought me so much peace ❤️

  • Annie Kapur6 months ago

    Ah man, I love your poetry so much. The atmosphere is so beautiful and calming. It's so sensory and just gorgeous. X

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