The wind moves slowly through the reeds,
Brushing the water with sighs.
A heron lifts from the water,
with only the sound of wings.
The willows let go of their gold,
One leaf at a time,
As if reluctant to part
But willing, in the end.
The creek still feels summer
In the way it glints at dusk
shimmering with quietness
that belongs to our memory.
We stand on the bank,
Not saying much,
Letting the moment gather
Like mist over the land.
It will pass. We know.
And we know better
than to embrace it quickly.
Still,
We hope it lingers,
Not forever,
Only long enough
that we don't forget.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.
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Comments (3)
Nicely-written! 🌸
The serenity of this brought me so much peace ❤️
Ah man, I love your poetry so much. The atmosphere is so beautiful and calming. It's so sensory and just gorgeous. X