Waves roll our vessel
As water forms skyscrapers
The calm has left us
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Thavien's Token:
This poem was originally commented on Kayleigh Fraser ❤️'s "Parting Waters."
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So few words and yet so powerful! This was a heart palpitating Haiku!!
That photo complements Haiku very well. The sense of foreboding was so prominent. I loved it!
Great job!