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In counting All the Stars

The Destiny does magic

By P.A.Vinura JayasankaPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2025

On a March night,

when the frisky cool wind

was our only companion.

You and I were lying on the ground,

where we always craved to see

the night sky at its best.

My hands were a bit restless

as they were by your hands.

After seeing the sky manifesting the magic of cosmos,

you whispered to me to,

count all the stars till the night ends.

I thought looking at the sky,

where I have shared millions of thoughts with.

Then I started counting from the pattern Orion,

which I always loved watching.

Yeah, there I counted the glistening seven of it.

Then, again I fell into a sea of thoughts

and gave up the idea of counting all stars,

and you were silently wondering.

There I could count to nine

as I counted two more after seven.

The last two glowing stars

stopped my heart for a while

and I found myself

gently gravitating toward them.

I saw all the stars, galaxies, and universe

in those forever glowing stars.

I felt those two stars

warmed up all the veins in my body

in a relieving way

as I saw love, respect, gratitude,

truthfulness, honesty, playfulness,

bravery, strength, and calmness in them.

With all these precious gifts they offer

why would I ever even think of,

counting any more?

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About the Creator

P.A.Vinura Jayasanka

Hi! I'm an EE Engineering UG who is passionate on poetry and movie critiques with mastering both creative and analytical aspects. You can follow me on fb:

https://web.facebook.com/people/Vin-J-Writer/61555864435081/?mibextid=ZbWKwL

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  • Emos Sibu Poriei (Kaya)7 months ago

    Beautiful! Congratulations on TS!

  • Aspen Marie 9 months ago

    Beautiful

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  • Marie381Uk 10 months ago

    Brilliant ♦️♦️♦️

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  • Denise Larkin10 months ago

    A wonderfully crafted poem.

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    this is so simply written yet so beautiful and magical.

  • Humaira 10 months ago

    Nice

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