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Ice

a poem

By Raine NealPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Ice
Photo by boris misevic on Unsplash

The sheen, untouched

Pristine but waiting

Like it wants me to break the tension, make my marks

Like it's calling me

The crowd is quiet and there's something serene yet sinister about being the first

Glassy, glossy, carved into by my blades

Chunks flying, the quiet satisfying sounds of a beginning

I take my place in the center, the claps roar and echo

My music starts and my routine begins

My feet create trails, a visual reminder of my moves right as I make them

A shadow, as if someone follows right behind me

I jump and spin and twist and careen

It guides me, I land with ease, almost like it's catching me in its arms

Cold and hard, just as I knew it would be, right where I knew it'd be

Holding me up with strength, showing me off with elegance

It dances with me, we weave a delicate web

My final pose, an adoring ovation

I'm hardly even breathless

An effortless performance

Smooth like the ice

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About the Creator

Raine Neal

Just trying to make it through the days - writing is a great way to stay distracted and refreshed.

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  • Manisha Dhalani2 years ago

    This poem itself felt like a dance.

  • Elisabeth Balmon2 years ago

    Like the way you structured the sheen & pristine without following a couplet rhyme scheme/anything of the sort. I love internal rhyme & everything similar

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