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I Visited The Sun

The Sun's Eternal Flight

By Von HansPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

As I close my eyes,

I am transported away,

To a world beyond this one,

Where I fly, free as a bird, through the day.

I soar through the sky,

On wings of pure delight,

A being of pure energy,

As I journey through the night.

The stars are my companions,

Twinkling with endless glee,

As I circle the sun,

In a dreamlike fantasy.

I am weightless and free,

As I dance on the wind,

My spirit unbound,

As I journey within.

For in this dreamlike state,

I am more than just flesh and bone,

I am a being of pure magic,

On a trip around the sun, all alone.

I glide through the galaxy,

As time and space melt away,

Lost in a dreamy reverie,

As the universe unfolds before me.

I am one with the cosmos,

As I ride on the solar winds,

My soul soaring higher,

As I journey around the sun again.

For in this magical realm,

I am free to roam and roam,

A celestial being,

On a never-ending journey home.

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About the Creator

Von Hans

Passionate writer and storyteller. Seeking to craft engaging and meaningful content. Believer in the power of the written word. My goal is to bring stories to life. When not writing, enjoying reading, exploring, and loved ones.

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