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I SPY

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By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
I SPY
Photo by Kevin Andre on Unsplash

I spy with my little eye:

  • A hot air balloon floating in the sky
  • The softball from a winning game
  • An S-hook
  • A two-seater car, ready for a cruise
  • A picture of a bride and groom
  • One reading lamp, missing a light bulb
  • One alarm clock, stopped at five past 12
  • Three square electric clocks
  • A swing for a bear and his teddy
  • A full plum pig
  • One hippo, with mouth wide open
  • A rickety house, forever frozen in place
  • One musical instrument, missing its strings
  • A broken electric fan, made out of metal
  • A train, stopping to unload its cargo

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About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    This was such a creative concept! Awesome job!

  • C. H. Richard2 years ago

    Treasures of someone ♥️

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