I saw him standing there.
Love at first sight so true.
When he took my hand to take me away from this awful place.
Our love is at first sight.
I saw you across the room, when you took my hand I knew everything would be okay.
"I'm I'm Jake."
"I'm Alina."
Those words changed my life.
As I look into his bright blue eyes I know everything will be okay.
How I know you ask, I know because when I look into his I see a bright light.
That special connections, that instant meet cute, that's the moment right now.
About the Creator
Emily Curry (Rising Phoenix)
Author, blogger, and in 7 months I will be a mom.
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