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I Saw Him

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By Emily Curry (Rising Phoenix)Published 4 years ago 1 min read
I Saw Him
Photo by Jamie Street on Unsplash

I saw him standing there.

Love at first sight so true.

When he took my hand to take me away from this awful place.

Our love is at first sight.

I saw you across the room, when you took my hand I knew everything would be okay.

"I'm I'm Jake."

"I'm Alina."

Those words changed my life.

As I look into his bright blue eyes I know everything will be okay.

How I know you ask, I know because when I look into his I see a bright light.

That special connections, that instant meet cute, that's the moment right now.

love poems

About the Creator

Emily Curry (Rising Phoenix)

Author, blogger, and in 7 months I will be a mom.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    beautiful

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