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I pretended that You Loved Me

Two worlds driftted apart

By Marie381Uk Published 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

I pretended that You Love Me

The sky is heavy, starless, bare,

A world consumed by thick despair.

Each broken cloud, each bitter sigh,

Illustrates the love you won’t deny.

Your shadow lingers, cold and near,

A haunting proof, a whispered fear.

In every step, in every breath,

I feel your love, a quiet death.

The rain falls sharp, it cuts, it stings,

The weight of sorrow your love brings.

No joy, no warmth, just heavy chains,

A love that lives in endless pain.

And as I stand in this endless night,

I see your love in the absence of light.

Not warmth, not peace, but a tethered plea—

Your love is the dark that consumes me.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mother Combs12 months ago

    💙

  • Ali Sadeek Ahmed12 months ago

    AMAZING

  • Alex H Mittelman 12 months ago

    I also pretended that You Loved Me, Too! Fantastic work and amazing poem! Very well written! I read this three times! Great work! Absolutely amazing! ♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️💙♥️❤️♥️❤️🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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