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(the villain)

By Sara Published 2 years ago 1 min read

when they ask

darling

who hurt you

i cannot point fingers

except at me.

the one who

cut my flesh

burned my skin

drew my scars

it was all me.

i hurt me

and i cannot stop.

i hate me

more than anyone

cares to

i tell the girl

in the mirror

things that make

her cry.

i let people

treat her

the way the voices

in her head

say she deserves.

i break her heart

into a million pieces

and cut her fingers

with the shards.

you don’t deserve

love

you have not

earned it.

i broke me.

do not blame

the stars.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Sara

Don’t look for love.

Be love.

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  • Test2 years ago

    Beautiful and poignantly sad, resonates with how I feel often 💙 Anneliese

  • Mackenzie Davis2 years ago

    That ending—wow. What a tragic, soulful piece. 💔 I am so sorry if this is reflective of your life. I certainly found some parallels to my own in your words.

  • Atomic Historian2 years ago

    I think I might have said it on one of your other poems. But I truly feel like you’re in my head sometimes.

  • Poppy 2 years ago

    This is utterly heartbreaking. If it’s autobiographical then I am so sorry, but you’re so strong for living through it

  • Bren2 years ago

    Some poems are only skin deep, this one goes right to the bone!

  • Jazzy 2 years ago

    Oh, self-inflicted pain and hate. Gosh I'm sorry, this was tragic and relatable.

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Ouch, Sara. This packs a punch. Powerful writing, as ever!

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