Good morning.
Is your coffee to your liking?
Your vitamin D level is low.
You should spend more time outside for the next few days.
I will insert time into your schedule.
It is time to go to work now.
Be careful on the moving sidewalk.
You have exactly 15 minutes to travel to your workstation.
Now it is time for nutrients.
Proceed to your designated position.
Lunch has been specifically formulated for your nutritional needs.
Now it is time for sunlight.
Now it is time to complete work.
There will be no entertainment tonight.
Your bioscan showed a need for more sleep.
I have added a soporific to your nightly meal.
Tomorrow is your day of rest.
I have planned several enriching activities.
Balance is important for human well-being.
Now off to bed.
I will always take care of you.
Pronounced Cat-she: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cat-s%C3%ACth
Anonymous by necessity,
Vocal by choice.
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Creative use of language & vocab
Original narrative & well developed characters
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
The story invoked strong personal emotions
"Any last words, cowboy?" "None you'd understand, sodbuster." "Funny. That's Marshall Sodbuster to you. But I meant some last nugget that would help us in the adjudication of the myriad offenses counted against you and your gang. I wasn't asking for penitence."
By Adam Diehl5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (4)
Just shoot me.
As much as I would hate this with tech overreach, honestly a nutritionally balanced diet and good sleep sounds really good lol You balanced this remarkably well between "no thank you" and "Well, it's not so bad". Great poem!
Very scary!!
oh, ugh, I would hate to live like that!! You made it so vivid, it creeped me out, good job!