i n e f f a b l e
stream of consciousness
forget language
show me the
g e s t i c u l a t i o n
of your jowls
as you realize
your joy and grief
a m p l i f y
the melody of
your blood mixing
with infinity
e c h o i n g
through the chasms
of your heart
r e v e r b e r a t e
my core
with
your blaring
song of life
draw the very
e s s e n c e
from your lungs
distilled like
s t a r r y
mist
into the cold
blustering air and
bathe me in your
slow
e x h a l e
by the
tempered light
of the
frosty night
u n v e i l i n g
your soul against the
script of the
m o o n
paint the energy
of your being
onto my canvas in
g o l d e n
sequences
and whorls of
c e l e s t i a l
arrangements
and i will see
w h a t
you are
read you in
peaks and valleys
in sacred geometry
say
N O T H I N G
and i’ll hear
e v e r y t h i n g
that is uttered
in the whispers of
your being
in the
w a v e s
of your design
show me the
rawness of life
r e s o n a t e d
in the
vibration of
your force
u n r a v e l
your code and
s p l a y
it before me
smear it
on the
m i r r o r
of the starlit sky
and
then
t h e n
i will begin to
understand
the you
that is you without you
under the words
and
pleasantries
the you that exists
b e y o n d
invented
d r i v e l i n g
the you that is more than the
limited options
of manmade
s y m b o l s
s t r u n g
t o g e t h e r
by threads of
tongue
speak to me
in your
l a n g u a g e
the one that exists
only to you
one that can’t be
i n t e r p r e t e d
by anything
but the
q u i n t e s s e n c e
of which you are
smother me
in the
t i m e l e s s n e s s
that is you
the bits that are
c a l c u l a t e d
down to the final
root of the galaxies
s p a r e
me
the this
and
the that
give me raw
f r a g m e n t s
pieces and petals
b l o w n
through the fields
and
beneath it all
in the splintered
b r e a k s
of
blistered bark and
drippy sappy
r i n g s
the loamy rich
w i l d
soils of you
sprouted from
worlds beyond the
d e p t h s
sing to me in
l i g h t
a nebula in
c o l l a p s e
the brilliant
explosion of
r a d i a n c e
at your conception
show me the
e s s e n c e
of you
in its purest
most
u n i n h i b i t e d
form
the form
from which you came
b e y o n d
the bounds of
skin and bone
muscle and brain and chatter
g o
d e e p e r
s t i l l
to
the code and calculus
of your
e x i s t e n c e
please
please
i long to
s e e
the vast
s p r a w l i n g
expanse of
e v e r y t h i n g
that is
y o u
About the Creator
Kristen Balyeat
Words fly to me on the wind, bump into me as I'm strolling the city, splash me in the face while I rest by the river, and shake me awake in the middle of the night—I’m humbly one of the vessels they use to come to life.
Also, i love you:)
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Comments (22)
How to say this... I'm really not arrogant/conceited, but I am honest. That said, you're one of no more than 3 writers in total on this platform that I can bear to read more than a few lines. Anywho, you have creative talent. Also, I believe everyone who derives any joy or similar emotion from words should follow that dream unapologetically. I just may not really wanna read it..
This was very intricate and expansive, I enjoy the way it describes the feeling of energetic resonance In relation to in depth, true energetic knowing from a spiritual standpoint. Thank you
nice kepp good working
Ai! Ai! Ai! I love when things get cosmological, geometrical and subliminal and sublime. Bonkers, love—blown away.
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I love this and congrats on your top story!!
very nice and well created poem!!
Amazing work. I love how you waive words in this poetry ❤️
You always make words seem so much more beautiful by the way you format! :) Great job as always! :D
Superb girl!
Excellent poem.
lovely poetry, loved your entry... congrats 👌
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Nice job!
Beautiful piece!
Wonderful✨😍 Congratulations on well deserved top story! ✨
Gorgeous imagery with great detail that I can feel the love emanating from
Wow!!! I felt transformed by your words. They truly had an awakening effect on my mind as I read it. And the cadence was perfect. Outstanding work, Kristen!
Oh wow, this is so, so gorgeous, Kristen! Too many stunning words to choose from here. "Tempered" caught my eye (by far not the only one, though!) because I just used it in a poem right before I read this. =) This is spectacular work!
Oh my! Astounding. Girl, you are a poetic genius. 👏👏👏
OMG, Kristen! One beautiful phrase after another. It's impossible to pick a favorite part of this, because if all flows in to one literary masterpiece! Well done. Well done! WELL DONE!
I am seriously breathless. This was unbelievably, gosh, I can't find the words. Look what you did! lol This was perfect and described how I actually feel about someone I love deeply to the T. Thanks for sharing. I feel honored to have read this! 😊