I’m going to whisper
Carefully, listen carefully, I don’t repeat anything twice
laying here
I see you
I pull your hair over your ear
I whisper something
It’s not sensual
It’s not a “thing”
It’s real cause I’m here
And so are you.
I’m logical
I know it’s not true
We belong to others, and kept it so,
It was not
Like it could’ve been
Unless we lived in another place
In a new world
In a memory that existed before
And kept reliving over and over again,
I’m
Going to whisper,
Whisper softly
And I’m not going to repeat myself anymore
What we had was better than any human relationship
Than a label
Than a name
It wasn’t a whisper
Until you made it one.
I’ll whisper
Love can be many things,
It doesn’t have to be all or nothing.
Love can be true friendship, even
If we never
Whisper again.
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