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Because you snore
You're impatient
You have a few grays
You've got some cushion at your waste
Your sweaters are loud
You laugh at your own jokes
Your smile puts rays of sunshine to shame
It pains me when you walk away
You are the bright spot of my day
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Comments (3)
Your smile puts rays of sunshine to shame. Nicely done!!
This is so cool. Unconditional love for someone else means even loving their 'flaws.' This is so perfect; it sounds like it must come from your personal experience. If it doesn't, you have an awesome imagination. Write On! ⚡💙⚡
Now that is pure love. Snore, impatient - loud sweaters and you still love the person. - True love!! Nicely Done!!!