Did it work or should I let it break?
Duty takes turn, dry hearts beat now
Ice caps melt as my sweetheart freeze
Crowns drown, shredded wings swing
Blunt love and shades of sharped pain
Did I love you or the love?
It's good to see waves flow
breezes that keep up the move
and life that continues
I love the love more than you
words harder to say
but life is worth to play
somethings change and something don't
Steps shiver
Deaths walk along the dreaded love
Surviving with a smile
Did you forget the love
your stains disappear
silently pains reappear
Love loves love
life loves you
longing lights sleep open eyed
waiting for your words
and that familiar hand on my side
About the Creator
Karun
🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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