
**Introduction:**
Sometimes, words written in the past carry even more meaning in the present. While going through my old writings, I rediscovered poetry I wrote back in 2010, during my mid-20s—a time of reflection, growth, and deep emotions. These pieces capture moments of love, struggle, and self-discovery, and I’m excited to share them with you.
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I Knew -Written by: Commodore Jones and a Stranger (BlkStallyun)
Commodore:
that when I saw you at the bar,
fine Brotha that you are,
you would be the one to take
me to the next level of love.
I just wanted to hug you
Simply because I knew
and I watched
while you sipped on your drink
I couldn't help but to think.
Why my body started to shiver
and my insides begin to quiver.
Did you feel that heat
when I finally decided to speak?
Thinking about that Victoria Secret.
Glad that I decided to keep it.
Though its' threads are so fragile
you'd have to take it off easy.
On second thought,
I don't care if you rip it right off
of me.
Better yet, let me take it
off for you.
I just want to show you.
Did you step off the page
of a General Quality magazine?
I bet under that Armani
you body is so lean.
Muscles so tight that's
how I
like it that you're checking me out too
Your eyes say what you want to
do
to me.
Then the D.J. played my favorite
song.
Oh yes I knew it all along.
When you walked towards me
I knew it was going to be.
I told my girls that you was
gonna be my man
when you reached out
your hand
and you said . . .
BlkStallyun:
Hello Miss
they are playing my song
and I hope
you don't
think I come off too strong
but I'd love to have
this dance with you
and I'm kinda hoping that
you wanna dance with me too.
I've been checking you out
from across the room.
My eyes focused on you
like a camera on zoom.
Let's dance, flirt and talk with each other.
That's the only way to get way to
get to know one another.
As I let you lead me out
to the dance floor,
I saw a lot of things that I adore.
Painted On Jeans profiling that tail
make me glad that I am born a male.
See through white silk shit and no bra.
In most states it's against the law.
Nipples peeking thru winking at me.
got me in mind of where I'd like to be
Shutting out the others
that really don't matter
as we pay no mind to
the room full of chatter.
I'm sensing you're
feeling me
and you'd like to be
alone with me
touching you
teasing you
making you sigh
and moan . . .
About the Creator
BeeSparrow
I’m Bee Sparrow.
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Comments (2)
Oooo, this was steamy and hot. Well done!
I knew this would be good! Great work!