I can’t eat,
ain’t got no food, 🧐
can’t make out,
not in the mood, 🤷🏻♀️
can’t go to town,
my car is down, 😳
can’t top the hill,
done lost my will, 😡
but, can chug a beer,
I say,
hey, “beer here!” 😂😂
Don’t kick me out, just 😊 and think, he’s over the deep end, thanks for the read, hope ya got a chuckle, 😂😂
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
Write on my friends
Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you
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Comments (6)
Lol, that indeed made me chuckle! I had fun reading this!
Lol. That was great.
Funny and cute! Nice job, Moe! 🤗❤️
Supercute! 😊
A respectable talent, sir, as is your writing prowess! 🍻🍺
Love the rhythm, nicely done and very funny 😁🤩