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I give myself over

Nature poem, inspiring...all that sorta thing. Yes, it's about rain...again. Sue me.

By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
I give myself over
Photo by Rich Soul on Unsplash

I give myself over

I turn to the great above

To the waterfalls of the sky

As winter marches forward

And the downpour drenches

I and everything else

I feel renewed and refreshed

Even if the wind howls

As the temperature drops

The heavens open and calmness reigns

Over me, over you, over us

Over the world beneath

I outstretch my arms, still

And welcome

The majesty, the mystery and the power

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Author's Notes: Just another poem about me and the rain. Apologies, if necessary.

Thank you for your ongoing support, everyone.

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶2 years ago

    I love the rain… captures how refreshing it is!

  • ThatWriterWoman2 years ago

    I love your winter positivity! Thanks for writing this Paul!

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Another rain poem? Awesome! ☺️👏 Definitely cleansing! Great work. Wish it rained more here! 😁

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Loved the subtitle... we can never have too many poems about rain. Nicely done.

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    I almost missed this one! Fortunately, it popped up at the bottom of Sempiternal Sacrifice. Love the attitude in the subtitle, and you should use the last two words in it in place of any apology for what you write. Just keep pouring out these incredible words and setting that bar higher.

  • Sir Paul, I've told you before that you should never apologise for what you write! Loved your poem! 🍩🥐

  • I live in the Great Plains region. As long as the water isn't over our noses, we keep praying for more.

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Ha ha! To be fair, the rain is a mighty fine muse.

  • Kristen Balyeat2 years ago

    Gorgeous! Gorgeous! Gorgeous! Now I’m refreshed. Thank you for the cleansing rain of words you just poured over us. 🌧️💞💫 Love your subtitle, btw! 😂

  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    💙

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