I Forgive You

I’m struck by how clearly you separate understanding from excusing. That distinction gives the poem its strength.

This reminds me so much of a relationship I had.... for me, forgiving was much harder. I wish I could have done it so beautifully,like you.

This piece is incredibly powerful. I love how the image contrasts so nicely with your title, "I forgive you." It isn't aggressive but delicate—the dry leaves contrasting with the bright flower perfectly illustrate how something died and what is living is out of focus. I like how you framed this: starting with understanding and acknowledging the pain, but then revealing the twist that the one who left was the one truly to blame. The way you used language to soften the blow but then tighten it up as we read was truly skillful. The anaphora was like watching you take steps, both toward us and toward the person in question. That atmosphere is chilling and deeply effective.

Great poem, Sara. I do love a poem that rhymes, and this bounces along nicely. Each stanza says so much, it is like a tiny book of regret and remorse.

It takes a lot of strength so walk away. A strength that I'm yet to muster. But I'm glad you're doing well. Loved your poem!

Powerful & inspiring!

We forgive to give ourselves peace, to let go of what hurts. Love this.