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I can't make you love me

A breakup nonete.

By F Cade SwansonPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
I can't make you love me
Photo by Kelly Sikkema on Unsplash

“I can’t make you love me if you don’t.”

Bonnie Raitt sure did have it right.

You made me forget myself,

unremember my pride.

I longed for you to

reciprocate

my feelings.

You could

not.

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About the Creator

F Cade Swanson

Queer dad from Virginia now living and writing in the Pacific Northwest. Dad poems, sad poems, stories about life. Follow me on insta at @fcadeswanson

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  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    I'm with Silver. That not on its own was a low punch.

  • Silver Daux2 years ago

    Oof! This is a heavy one. The hard drop of the "not" at the end makes it so final. Great job!

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