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Vibrantly singing
I am displayed but briefly
Our seasons, fleeting
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Such a lovely haiku, Kelli. Beautiful entry <3
Love the fitting ‘singing’ allusion, Kelli. Lovely haiku! 😊🍃🍁
Can't get over your image choice. Love the way the light hits the leaf. I love that we get to cleanse and open up our minds to the idea of vibrant, mixing with the word singing. I like how it works so nicely together. I like how you centered the poem around a person, you. As being the one who is briefly displayed. Then pulling away from the self to humanity as a whole. Love this. Very thoughtful and captivating, even as just three lines. Fantastic work as always Kelli 🤗 ❤️
How true of the autumn season. Good job.
Indeed. And so nicely written. I like the subtle metaphor in the ambience of this poem