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I Am Louder Than You

(blues sonnet)

By j.e.ridpathPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

A cacophony of noise in your head,

I am screaming whispers that haunt your head —

A swirling hurricane, with skies of red.

Vehemently imposing on your mind,

I howl my bitter laments in your mind —

Your sense of self is no longer defined.

Obscured by my roaring storm, tears flood down,

I strangle your breath, your chest weighted down —

I asphyxiate your soul, feel you drown.

Attempts to silence me, you do avail,

I feel you resist, but to no avail —

The more you resist, the louder I wail.

And though you think your puny voice will rise —

You’re eternally engulfed in my cries.

sad poetry

About the Creator

j.e.ridpath

"No mud, no lotus" - Thich Nhat Hahn

Author of "a curious dream", available now on Amazon: https://a.co/d/1JgqhMd

Blissful, euphoric

Moments; self-destructive storms -

In poetic form.

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  • Test2 years ago

    very powerful poem that will resonate with many people.

  • Oooo, I loved how dark this one was. Awesome poem!

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