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Hypnotic Jerks

Limerick

By Kristen BalyeatPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Hypnotic Jerks
Photo by Bruce Christianson on Unsplash

I drifted to sleep…

dream terrain was steep

then somehow I fell...

maybe into a well...

and my whole body did leap.

nature poetry

About the Creator

Kristen Balyeat

Words fly to me on the wind, bump into me as I'm strolling the city, splash me in the face while I rest by the river, and shake me awake in the middle of the night—I’m humbly one of the vessels they use to come to life.

Also, i love you:)

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  • Quincy.V3 years ago

    Well done!👌👌

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    I felt this one.

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    Ahh!!! The worst sensation haha. This was great and I love your image choice for it!

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