Continuously sprinting, whatever exit,
Thickened brush, darkened forest, no path,
Briefly paused moment, recognition of relief, repeated scenery, overweighting it,
Consumed by fear, its boldness drastically reducing the steps gained,
Run! Run! Faster!
Constant branches crippling the view, smacking, ripping, and holding,
Narrowing sight of opened paths closing, falling back to the original beginnings,
Not escaping the nightmares of inner turmoil,
Wake up! Please!
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End.
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Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
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