Hurries
A new style poem inspired by architecture. I call it "Boxcar poems."
Hurry Hurry Hurry
Hurry Hurry Hurry
Hurry Hurry Hurry
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Before it goes off,
It's live.
Can't rewind it.
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What did I miss?
What did I miss?
What did I miss?
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Something I saw.
Something I liked.
Wish I could go back.
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Waits Waits Waits
Waits Waits Waits
Waits Waits Waits
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Mom!
Moments...
On television again.
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K.A. Smith
K. A. Smith – published author and poet with experience in architectural design. I try to bring love and life into every poem or story. I believe every piece of art is "effective" in some way. Please follow along, and share your thoughts.
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