How a Room Forgets the Fire
When the fire goes out, what part of us keeps burning?

First, the blaze performs—
walls flushed gold,
shadows bowing and stretching
like late guests at the door.
You say it feels like we’ve paused time,
hands open to the heat,
faces rinsed in flicker,
as if we could stay
inside this orange heartbeat
forever.
But the logs have other plans.
They sigh into themselves.
Collapse into fragile cities of coal.
Flames that once shouted
Now speak in lowercase.
Shortening into commas of light
between longer and longer breaths
of dark.
We keep feeding the silence
with little nothings—
“Remember when…?”
“It used to…”
Our words drift up with the smoke.
Thin and curling,
already forgetting the shape
of their own urgency.
One last bright tongue of fire
licks the edge of a blackened branch,
tries to stand up,
fails gracefully.
Its final flare throws your profile
in sharp relief:
all high cheekbones and history,
the ghost of every argument
We didn’t win or lose,
only outlast.
Then it happens—
not a grand finale,
just a soft exhale,
the light folding itself
into a small red sign
and then—
nothing.
We don’t move.
In the dim, the ash glows faint.
like stubborn memories
That won’t quite agree
to die.
Somewhere in that pale dust
A new morning is already
warming its hands.
About the Creator
Milan Milic
Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.




Comments (1)
I love the language in your language of loss—it resonates so well with me. I’m glad I’m not the only one trying to my devastation beautiful.