Hope from a Hopeless Perspective
Keep the dream alive.
Standing on the corner in need of a cigarette
He's dancing on the border between guilty and innocent
Eighteen years old, and this kid is a wreck
Can't even pay for his own damn bus ticket
You can see in his eyes
All the despair
A blind man can foresee his demise
He's just lonely and scared
The look of a sad old man
But he's still in the youth
Thinking 'bout his battles,
Damn!
How's he still in the loop?
All he does is survive and his feelings are through
The reason he's still alive is he's got millions to prove
Otherwise, that he's not like these other guys
Telling him to make a couple signs
And ask for cash, but he won't take their dumb advice
He'll work but he won't beg for shit
But he's got no job, he's thinking this is it
Because no one's hiring kids with no residence
And he's tired of the same bullshit rhetoric
"Keep going, work harder, chase excellence"
An outcast who's been demonized
But with every new rhyme he writes he keeps the dream alive
Every word in every verse, he's taking demon lives
He keeps the drive when there should be nothing to give
'Cause for the past week at least
Where he sleeps at night is under a bridge
In moments where it seems hopeless
He remains focused
Rhyming all day, finding his way
Hoping he gets noticed even if it's hopeless
Hoping he gets noticed even if its hopeless.
About the Creator
Sawyer Sullivan
I love to write and play with words.
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Comments (2)
I love the beat and cadence of this poem! Feels like it could be a spoken-word or performance piece too. Great job!
This is so cool, Sawyer, I love rhyme, too! Awesome work. It sounds like song lyrics