Trying to escape from
Ornery deceits.
Recalling past events,
The twisted punches of a lover
Undone.
Releasing old memories
Ending the resurgence of pain.
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Ruth Stewart
Never one to do one thing at a time, I'm currently writing a horror novel and a book of poetry for the daughters of narcissists. Come back soon for a link to be included in all my news, on Vocal and elsewhere. I'd love to get to know you!
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Comments (12)
Wow, Ruth. This incredibly written. A truly masterful poem, in that it says SO MUCH and only uses the necessary words. That final line gives me hope, though. What an emotional piece. Fantastic acrostic, truly.
Ouch. I felt this myself, as I replay the moments in my mind. Very well done!
Beautifully written. I pray you be better with the release than I ever have been.
I absolutely love this one! Releasing old memories is so difficult. They say what does not kill us only makes us stronger. If nothing else, it gives us something to write about!
I don't know how I'd missed this one, but I'm glad Paul highlighted it. This is a amazing, Ruth!
This is a powerful one ❤️❤️
This started out describing the very things that torture me, but somehow ended by describing exactly what would free me. Amazing!
Releasing old memories was so liberating! Loved your poem!
Powerful. You’ve succinctly defined it so very well. Great work.
Just wow!!! This one hits hard. I don't think I've seen anything else that deals with this subject so well.
Very brief but touching and insightful,nice one
This is stunning! Seriously good. Very emotive, very strong imagery. Great!