Honest and cleansing
Two atoms of hydrogen
One of oxygen
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Thank you for reading my latest piece.
So...this is my 7th entry into the Quadru-Haiku Challenge.
I wanted to make a semi-acrostic sort of thing with the chemical name of water. I am not completely convinced it has the impact I wanted, but I'm sending it forth into the Vocal-ether and not worrying too much about it.
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Paul Stewart
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Comments (10)
This is pleasantly different .
Very nice! I love science and the way this came together. Hearted and subscribed.
What a clever job!
Whoaaaa! This is an acrostic! Fantastic job!
The life blood for all of us. Well done and very clever ❤️
I love these science ones. ☺️❤️ Amazing how cleansing 3 atoms can be! Great job, Paul!
Well done Paul, very creative and clever.
Very clever--clear and succinct! I have 2 so far if you'd care to read.
This is really good, and clever. You're right, the title made me curious so I think it works well.
Clever!!! And I liked the word honest in there. It leant to the simplistic, clean feel of the poem itself. Great work! (apparently you have acrostics and haiku on the brain and not password stories, which is where I find myself as well...hahaha)