Today I finally opened my heart
Solely to someone I dearly love
And everytime I feel his warmth
My mind keeps telling me it might be a bluff
Though I could never comprehend
How he makes my heart melt
But with him, all the good and bad just blend
As he saves what I thought could never mend
With his gaze, I freely subside
With his smile, I completely collide
I may never find the right words to confide
But I always want to be by his side
He has eyes that shine like moonlight
And a mind so brilliant, my excitement just won't hold back
In him, our souls and minds are alike
It's like revealing the greatest life hack
For the first time, peace suddenly kissed my life
And for the last time, the past, I don't wanna look back
My happiness when he made me his wife
Home is where we will be, where nothing will go black.
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Kelson Hayes
Kelson Hayes is a British-American author and philosopher, born on 19 October 1994 in Bedford, England. His books include Can You Hear The Awful Singing, The Art of Not Thinking, and The Aerbon Series.
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Lovely couple.
Sweet! :)