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Holding Hands

New Water

By Kiki Le TigrePublished 4 years ago 1 min read
Holding Hands
Photo by Biel Morro on Unsplash

Whale swallowed all, floating head over feet

Hand clutches his, and love replaced the sun

Water washes burns, thorough and complete

Fireplace set, a home is made and search done

Holding hands in bed, bare feet our ships bow

Animal this size, no wonder I fell

Feet no longer stink, underwater now

And yet my lungs fill and empty like shells

In your hands, our hands, all my hope connects

Dissolving, clutching light, like Jonah I

Your hands a vessel I must first inspect

Our heat warming sheets where we lie

The love in these hands could grow a son

Or daughter

Our love is deep, for me,

It's new water.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Kiki Le Tigre

Kiki Le Tigre is a part-time poet, part-time human, committed to honest self expression. This expression is made public in hopes of inspiring others, or creating a connection point for those who may feel lost. Email: [email protected]

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran4 years ago

    Beautiful! 💖

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